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Seniors Collaborate on Gatsby and a Lit-to-Life Mural Project

Seniors in English IV and AP Lit Collaborate on Gatsby and a Lit-to-Life Mural Project
In the last weeks of the semester, members of the Class of 2024 read a high school classic,

F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby, and engaged in a series of sixteen journal prompts inspired by key lines from the novel, occasioning their own related experiences and recollections. Check out the murals in the main high school hallway to catch excerpts from those journal entries and a “look-see” into the dreams, the once-special objects, recollected names, experiences of the “ultimate degree,” self-reinventions, their own visions for “one fine morning --” and what they view as their supports to “beat on, boats against the current,” in pursuit of their future aspirations, among many other Gatsby-inspired anecdotes from their own real, true lives. Congratulations to the Class of 2024 - “-- tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther --”

The Women of Lockerbie Vision Board Projects in English 4

Ms. Hagge’s English 4 students finished reading Deborah Brevoort’s The Women of Lockerbie just in time for Yoh’s upcoming performance of this play. Written in the form of a Greek tragedy, the play portrays how individuals and a community cope with the trauma inflicted by the terrorist bombing of Pan Am Flight 103, a tragedy that occurred in 1988. For this summative project, students created vision boards with images and words representing the mood, characters, setting, and prominent themes in the play. After creating their vision boards, students wrote about their processes and presented their ideas in class. Here is a sampling of their vision boards and some excerpts of their presentations. We look forward to attending Yoh’s performances of The Women of Lockerbie on May 3rd and 4th!

“My process started by identifying my theme, which is that people need to grieve together and people need to support each other. I then found images that I thought related to my theme, like the image of the women grieving and holding hands. I then found images based on the mood and the setting, such as the hills, river, and sunrise. Then I added props, such as the candles, suitcase, and laundry. I chose the two words, hate and grief, because they were what I felt the play was really about; how to deal with hate and grief.” Grace Modarai

“I think that the two big themes of the play The Women Of Lockerbie are grief and unfairness. . . Madeline and Bill were still grieving from their son's death seven years later. Madeline thought she did everything right yet still this happened to her. My vision board captures this in the photos of the picture perfect house and the picture perfect family with a line crossing it out. . . The vision board being dark and gloomy shows that I understood the deep sadness caused by grief and conflicting feelings around fairness. The situation is so unfair. I also tried to show how important it was to the people left behind to have their loved one to be remembered as an individual and not just a nI also think that it is important to be able to tie all of the different objects together and be able to show a little bit of the story through the vision board. I think that one of the most important elements on my board were the many bags of people's belongings. I think that this one was really impactful because it showed us how many people lost their lives. Each set of their belongings showed us a little bit more about who the person was, making them real and not just random people or numbers. These were real people with real lives and had people that loved them. They mattered. “ Gracie Laperle

“For gathering my photos I looked up words relating to settings and the theme I chose which is to not let hatred win. I think my vision board communicates my theme through the photos I chose being directed towards more of a happy direction. . . I think the photo of the people hugging is the most important to my design because it represents my theme the most in the way that people can love and get through things with the help of loved ones and friends.” -Keller Pauly

“My design shows the two ways grief is shown in the story, one being grief that is shown through deep emotion and the other being grief that is hidden or pushed aside. This is shown by including pictures of emotion and images representing what Bill had to do after his son died, like talk to reporters and return his presents. . . My vision also shows Madeline’s sorrow, anger, and her search for her son.” -Lindsey Bacon

“I created this vision board by using keywords from my notes and the class notes on theme, mood, characters, and setting, and meshed each element together into one vision board. For example, I added a male character crying. However, in order to portray the grief that Bill is feeling in the book, I incorporated the ticket and the clouded thought bubble to portray his mixed feelings on his discovery of the ticket as well as the situation as a whole. This also doubles as a prop item. The image on the far left is added because I wanted to portray the grief of losing a child, as it is generally a very different type of loss than others. My props, in addition to the ticket, are the candles and the suitcase. The river and suitcase are placed where they are because of when they wash the clothes of their son in the story, but the word ‘healing’ is also incorporated into that section because I think that the river represented the family’s healing process and acted as an aid towards it. I think that the most important aspect of my vision board is the fire and clothing images because it represents the conflict of the story, and with no conflict there is no story. If I were to design the set based on a scene, the scene would be when Madeline is stepping over the river and expressing her grief. The set would have a hilly background and a river running through the center of it, so conversation can happen on either side of it, between Bill, the women and Olive, and Madeline can be in the center of it.” -Hannah Watson

“First, I thought about where it was taking place. We know that it takes place in Scotland, and in the story they talk about the rolling hills there. After that I thought about the theme, and I wanted to show how Madeline was mourning the loss of her son. Then I thought about important parts of the story like the memorial and how in the play there should be candles as props. Another prop that I thought could be used is a suitcase that would have been her son’s.” –Catie Austin

Self-selected book creative projects

During the final week of the first semester, seniors in Ms. Hagge’s English 4 class wrapped up an independent reading project by presenting their creative poems, raps, mock diary entries, journals, digital presentations, and board games. Students were free to choose any book, fiction or nonfiction, from our extensive library collection. Designated class times were devoted to reading these self-selected books, and then students applied their creative thinking to a variety of projects. Special thanks to Ben Johnson for offering the NuVu lab and assistance to Hiekke Tans as he created his “Board Game of Thrones.” Pictured here are board games designed by:

  • Heikke Tans (“The Board Game of Thrones” about The Clash of Kings by R.R. Martin)

  • Kuba Marzec’s maze game inspired by The Maze Runner by James Dashner

  • Lucas Morgan’s Monopoly-style game about The Civil War by Robert Paul Jordan

  • Django Farinas’ Monopoly-style game about Brisinger by Christopher Paolin

  • Owen Kross’s board game about Battleships of the U.S. Navy in World War II by Stefan Terzibaschitsch.

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AP Language and Composition in “Nature”

Ms. Hagge’s AP Language and Composition class have been learning about rhetorical situation and rhetorical devices as they explore the essential question of the first thematic unit: “How do we reflect on humanity’s place in the natural world?”

After watching the film An Inconvenient Truth, discussing Al Gore’s rhetorical choices, doing presentations on rhetoric in a variety of texts concerned with the topic of climate change, we are now turning our attention to Emerson’s classic transcendentalist essay “Nature.”

We took the opportunity of fair weather, on a warm September afternoon to read and study “Nature” outside.

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AP Lit: Narrative Reality "Who's there?" Project

AP Literature seniors finished the year reading Hamlet and created a final project around the play's central question, "Who's there?"

This project, produced in a visual thinking/sketch-note style, was an opportunity for seniors to reflect on their childhood, adolescence and future prospects, as well as the literature of the year and what has mattered them in positive ways, as well as in less than desirable ways.

Thinking about their own humanity and the humanity in an array of characters from the works of John Steinbeck, Ian McEwan, Mary Shelley, Ralph Ellison, and back to Shakespeare, seniors set about composing a "To be" page, a "Not to be" page, a "Let be" page, and a concluding "Who's There" page for themselves.

These works (along with two proofs for all the ways The Lumineers' song Ophelia proves this band knows their Hamlet) are hung along the river behind The Bowl. If you'd like to check them out, they'll be up until Sunday, June 18th, weather permitting!

8th grade students explore artificial intelligence

As artificial Intelligence becomes a routine presence in our lives, 8th grade English students have begun investigating how AI creates and sorts natural human language. Students began by looking at artificial intelligence broadly, and took a homemade Turing Test to see whether they could tell the difference between human and AI artists, musicians, and writers. Then we took a deep dive into StoryQ, an AI text classification model that took us behind the scenes to see how a machine "reads" human text, identifies key words, and assigns them negative or positive weights to make predictions about the overall sentiment, or tone.

Students fed StoryQ ice cream reviews, then analyzed the words the machine used to make its predictions about sentiment. Some of the machine's decisions surprised us. For instance, it assigned a heavy negative weight to "like" and "just," which were sometimes used positively. It was also flummoxed by sarcasm :). At first, StoryQ was only able to predict 78% of reviews accurately, so we analyzed error cases and proposed new language rules to improve the model.

Once we understood more about how AI generates and classifies text, we turned our attention to its limitations and its role in our lives. We looked at news stories and discussed whether AI is sentient, and whether it will ultimately improve or worsen human communication, and human life. Students raised concerns from disinformation to job loss. Below is an AI-generated image of 8th graders having a fishbowl-style discussion, courtesy of DALLE-2, and an actual image of our class doing the same thing.

Vera Windish '24 wins Student Holocaust Education Competition

Vera Windish, an eleventh-grade AP Language and Composition student, has won first place in the Vermont Holocaust Memorial Student Writing and Poster contest for her poem entitled “The Cost of Saluting Ignorance,” linked here.

The theme of the contest was: “Why is it important for students to learn about the Holocaust?” and Vera addressed that theme with a moving and vivid narrative poem about the impacts of antisemitism. Her poem was displayed at the Vermont State House in honor of Holocaust Remembrance Day on April 18th. Congratulations, Vera!

Annie Hauze runner-up in Vermont State Poetry Out Loud finals

In the past week, senior Annie Hauze commanded the stage as Woodstock's Poetry Out Loud champion in the regional competition held in Barre, Vermont, qualifying for state finals; she went on to play the lead all weekend long in the fabulous Percy Jackson:The Lighting Thief Musical.

Taking full advantage of the gift of time a snow day affords, Annie added a third poem to her repertoire in preparation for the Vermont State Finals Competition for Poetry Out Loud, held at Burlington's Flynn Center, Thursday evening, March 16th. Competing with other state finalists from Burr and Burton, Champlain Valley, Bellows Free Academy- Fairfax, Peoples Academy, St. Johnsbury Academy, Bellows Free Academy -- St. Albans, Williamstown, Thetford and Rice Memorial, Annie led round one with Shakespeare's "Sonnet 55: Not marble nor the gilded monuments". In Round 2, Annie captivated her audience with her signature recitation of Adelaide Crapsey's "The Properly Scholarly Attitude". Annie's pacing, intonation, physical presence and delivery in both these recitations were impeccable and secured her position as one of the top 3 selected to recite a third poem, Thursday night.

To lean on a line from her rendition of "Clear Night" by Charles Wright, Annie was indeed "strung up in a strong light and singled out" for her excellence, "gears notch[ed] and engines wheel[ed]" in ways that led her to Woodstock's top finish as our first "runner up" in the state Poetry Out Loud competitions over the years.

While it was hard for any of us to discern the difference between Annie's recitations and Greer Kennedy's of St. Johnsbury Academy, top place went to Greer who will travel to Washington, D.C. in early May to represent Vermont in the national Poetry Out Loud contest. In the meantime, keep an eye out for more of Annie's amazing performances this spring in Shakespeare's Twelfth Night, the class of 2023 Speak Chorus, and likely many other performance events!

Language Students earn top honors in statewide competition

The Modern and Classical Language Department is thrilled to announce that the following students were recently recognized for creative excellence in state-wide competitions!:

In the Vermont Foreign Language Association's Annual Poster Contest,. Clara Burkholder earned 3rd place in the middle school division. Sophia Randolph earned 3rd place in the high school division. Danny Smith earned 1st place in the digital category (open to all grades).

In the Annual Writing Contest sponsored by the Classical Association of New England, Annie Hauze earned 1st place in Vermont for her poem titled "Madwoman".

Congrats to all!